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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-12-21 02:44 AM


To a place where wind shears swiftly cut by
storm cloud covers disappeared on the fly
entered a group of seasoned mini-cell chasers
convening on a suspected weather system
towards a spot where moisture was just right
and current updrafts occurred near insight.

the sky would open up in front dramatically
tornado hunters captured a moment frantically
equipped with phone, laptop, film and maps
a camera focus caught on a bissected sky
it's shutter snapped....

a tinge of orangy hue was crossed
dust and debris carelessly tossed
a plan unfolded where to stop
the town of Spencer lay next in skew
lightening streaks completed the view.

some residents would perish in that town
in direct path of a high speed funnel
draped with a precipitating urgency
headed by contributing clouds
churning fast-forward.

temporarily it escaped lens view
then reappeared in full force
shedded its dusty debris cover
reminders of dust bowl days set in
storm cells sprouted from a tumultuous din
sirens wailed along high plain horizons
distressed gents crammed a Sioux Falls motel
to learn of losses weather reports would tell...




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-21-2002 11:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-21 10:36 AM


Martin, you've captured that scene vividly.
Mother Nature can really whip us good sometimes, reminding us we are not really in charge after all.

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-12-21 12:07 PM


Very true storms can be predicted, tracked and followed and then at best townspeople warned..thanks for sharing.


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3 posted 2002-12-21 02:21 PM


great flow and vivid description of these terrible events, thanks
passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-21 02:53 PM


ah yes, the fury of Mother Nature...what a tragic event...it happened in Newton Mississippi a couple days ago, headed right for Florida panhandle...luckily all we got is rain, lightning, and wind.

Life is certainly unpredictable.

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5 posted 2002-12-21 03:24 PM


Martin, so good to see you here!
Yes...I know the fury of these storms..
living here in tornado alley.
Well done!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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6 posted 2002-12-21 03:33 PM


ecrivan
Well done excellent description.

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-12-21 11:58 PM


Thanks for sharing all, mother nature is unpredictable...credit should go to William Reid and his friends for their work here in helping to track this particular storm.

Dixie, didn't know there were tornados in that region, but up until a few years back never expected them just off the island of Montreal either!

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