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Casanova
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0 posted 2002-12-21 05:33 AM



I Love You!

The first word I,
Represents all of me.
All that I am inside,
And all I want to be.
All my thoughts,
My heart and soul.
My entire essence,
My being as a whole.
My hopes and dreams,
All that I Desire.
This is the word I,
All I aspire.

The second word LOVE,
Is still undefined.
cause it's more that a word.
It's a state of mind.
But love is rare,
And so hard to find.
Although when It's there,
You feel unconfined.
It's hard to explain,
the joy love brings.
It elevates your heart,
And gives you wings.
You feel you can fly,
When your love is around.
But when there not there,
Your six feet underground.
Love makes you feel perfect,
In each and every way.
And jus the thought of your love,
Will brighten your day.
Life finally makes sense,
And there’s a reason to live.
These are the feelings,
That love has to give.
So when you find love,
Grab on and hold tight.
Just love with care,
And you'll be alright.

But the most important word,
Is the third word YOU.
Because without that word,
There's no fist two.
For they loose their meaning,
For you hold them together.
And without you,
The first two would sever.
Without you, there is no love,
And without love, there is no I,
And without I, I loose my life,
And inside I want to die.
So you love and I,
Together forever we'll be.
Our limits not the sky,
For love sets us free.

Now you know the meaning,
Of the words I LOVE YOU.
And every time that I say it,
You can know that it's true.
Just look into my eyes,
For they never lie,
And maybe one day,
You'll stop asking why.
So I LOVE YOU,
With all of my heart.
And I pray to God in heaven,
That we'll never break apart.


© Copyright 2002 Daniel R. Cuellar - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-12-21 08:32 AM



Thanks, Daniel.
I needed that!

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2002-12-21 09:41 AM


Hope she reads this. Keep telling her each day.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-12-21 03:29 PM


Daniel, what an in-depth write! I really enjoyed this one, different from the typical.
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4 posted 2002-12-21 04:43 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, always tell her every day that you love her this way as I know she will always be blessed to have you! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-12-22 01:29 AM


that was beautiful.....someone is a very lucky gal

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

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