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Open Poetry #24

All Of You

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2002-12-28 04:54 AM

The softness of a full moon kiss
what I remember most
on nights like this

The smell of your perfume
taste of your lips
caress' in the bedroom

Lovers laughter of old fashion
only silenced; replaced
by our passion

Your sweet shyness
where only light allowed
in the room...was from the moon

All of you
on nights like this
I miss...all of you

Copyright ©1999-2001 Dennis Hicks

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-12-29 08:09 AM

Such a lovely romantic piece this is... I do think your work will be enjoyed here at Passions...

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-12-29 09:48 AM

You've captured the innocence of love, very sweetly with these delicate sentiments, Dennis. Nicely done. Welcome to Passions.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-12-29 07:52 PM

Yes, Dennis...I had noticed your former love's nickname...

and it made me smile...

just like the smiles I am receiving in reading your wonderful poems. Thank you!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-12-30 08:21 AM

Dennis,

Simply sweet, with a touch of sad.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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