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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-12-16 05:33 AM



Across The Midnight Sky

I gave rhyme the reason
To display my affection
Across the midnight sky
Amongst astral collection

Aspect of moon phases
Coloured silver and blue
A million stellar delights
Gave a shimmering view

The stillness of midnight
There my thoughts arise
Gazing the nightscapes
Against the moonlit skies

On stepping stone stars
I follow moonbeams trail
All my wishes are bound
Where my dreams unveil

With no distance too far
Lifted to elated heights
Across the silver galaxy
Star crossed lover unites

HopeĀ©2002

© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 05:34 AM


I love the night sky and you've painted a picture here that is just gorgeous! stepping stone stars...nice
HopeS
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2 posted 2002-12-16 09:52 AM


Thanks for your kind reply ..
this was written last night ,I  was 6 hours without any power black out, no computer or electricity , so I did take advantage and viewed the nightscape galaxy
Hope

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3 posted 2002-12-16 10:46 AM


What beautiful night skies you've shared!
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4 posted 2002-12-16 09:19 PM


Now you've gone and made me all starry eyed.  Love the feelings and the way you portrayed this.
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5 posted 2002-12-16 10:16 PM




(smiles) Oh Hope, this is so lovely, sweet friend, and may you always swim the bowl of stars to embrace your love in cosmic ecstasy always! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-12-16 10:24 PM


Hope, I love this beautiful picture you've painted with your words. thank you.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2002-12-16 11:00 PM


Rich tapestry of images and rhyme. Beautifully expressed, Hope.  ***Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-12-16 11:04 PM


this is starry,and celestial, and all those
magical things in this world...nice to read

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9 posted 2002-12-16 11:05 PM


Very beautifully penned Hope.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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