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MysticDreamer
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0 posted 2003-04-30 04:40 AM


Dream Wings

Listening deep within brings
guidance from above
Flying away with dream wings
into every heart of love

Across oceans of possibility
rising and falling with the tide
In patterns of intricacy
expressing their beauty inside

Over mountains of majestic height
beyond boundries of limitation
Messengers of freedoms light
seeding the birth of one nation

Riding rainbows out of the blue
flowing through crystal streams
Upon a golden voyage to
the dawn of infinite dreams

[This message has been edited by MysticDreamer (04-30-2003 04:41 AM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-30 12:07 PM


Fanastic dreams.  Joyce
mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-04-30 01:01 PM


Dream wings, I like it. Very nice poem.

mysticpoe

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3 posted 2003-04-30 11:20 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I love the imagery in this, sweet friend, this had me dreaming I was riding with the unicorns to the light over the rainbows to the heavens of endless dreams! (sigh) This is a true gem with stained-glass shiny art, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-05-01 10:05 AM


Such beauty in your dream wings!

"Listening deep within brings
guidance from above
Flying away with dream wings
into every heart of love"

...so true!
Love, Margherita

Seth
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since 2003-04-13
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5 posted 2003-05-03 09:50 PM


Wow, great poem! Really flows well.

~Seth

ffpercent243
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6 posted 2003-05-04 10:42 PM


At first I felt that "infinite dreams" was a cliche, but when I realised how the poem flows I can't think of anything better. Good poem.
Poet_Jenny_Lea
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7 posted 2003-05-04 10:50 PM


I liked poem alot. Very nice!
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