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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2002-12-10 08:08 AM


I cry when i think of you
When your scent returns i memories
When you your voice calls to me
I cry when i think of you
And how its nolonger going to be

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

© Copyright 2002 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-12-10 10:47 AM


as everyone tells me over and over again, wipe the tears and move on...(sure)

sighing
M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2002-12-11 02:38 AM


you're supposed to remember and smile ...I know that hard
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-12-13 03:10 AM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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4 posted 2002-12-13 05:23 AM




Be where you are. It is okay to cry; you will stop. Weeping is most cleansing. Releases lots of negative enengy. At least that is how it works for me. I cry with you, for this poem captures what many have felt.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
5 posted 2002-12-13 07:46 AM


Some people are destined to be a forever memory in our lives. Much better to have them there physically, but sometimes the memory is all we’re allowed. Trust me, the tears become less frequent, but the love never leaves.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

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