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"TWENTY OR LESS...#95"
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"TWENTY OR LESS...#95" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#95" Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON inhaling your faded sweatshirt sipping your burning eyes dangling on your sways as you slip through my life "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Inhaling your faded sweatshirt"--great line! Conjures up a lot of emotions! EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
To inhale someon's "faded sweatshirt" sure does sound like love to me.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark The fregrance stays past the slip by. Enjoyed this! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sweet sweat scents scintillate fired glazed eyes swaying rose hips lingering taste slips of you  |
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Jamie Dawg Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35 |
loved the mixture of senses used here. very evocative. Jd xx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH DANG MARK!! This is....this is....Ooooh! *Breathe Nancy...calmer now...some scents do linger longer* ~Hugs~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Earth Angel: That line seems to be one to which many may relate... Ethel: ...and much more... Martie: ...does it ever. Thank you. Kacy:  Jamie: It's all in the mix. Thanks for your time. Nancy:  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Mark, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I love thr passion this stirs up, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
OH WOW!!!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah, it's all about passion, no? Sandpiper: Glad there was wow in your oh...  Thank you.-MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (12-01-2002 05:03 PM).] |
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