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coyote
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0 posted 2002-11-30 10:36 PM


"first fruits"

she reeks
of sultry needs
the rainy cane
and jasmine
from spicy
scented islands

where
fragile
fragrant blossoms
unfold
their first fruits

wanton whispers
quietly
quicken
anticipation

as her hands
draw me
down
into the moonglow
of uncharted
paradise


  






[This message has been edited by coyote (12-02-2002 12:02 PM).]

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Wind
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1 posted 2002-11-30 10:48 PM


Enchanting. This needs to go in my library.

Never be normal!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-30 10:52 PM


This definitely worked for me!!!

EA

coyote
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3 posted 2002-12-01 05:26 PM


Wind,
Thanks for reading. I made some tweaks, as usual, lol.

Earth Angel,
Thanks for the read. Glad you like my work, which it seems is always  "in progress".

yours,
coyote

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

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