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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-11-13 12:47 PM


(I just lost my Great Aunt Brownie today.)

Why must there be death?
Death is sad.
So why must we bare sadness?
Because nobody can stop death.
Why do people die?
Why must our loved ones die?
It makes me mad.
But nobody can stop death from happening.
Which makes me sad.
All I can say is she is at rest.
But why must we deal with death?
Because Death is part of life.
So we can`t stop the envitable.
That is DEATH.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-11-13 01:41 PM


You touched me deeply with this one, Julie...
Death is indeed, a part of life...
Its ironic that we were born to die... but I guess that the trick is to make the most and best use of our time while we are here...
~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Cassie
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2 posted 2002-11-13 03:13 PM


Yes Death is a part of life.  My thoughts are that we were created to serve the creator, to love others, and yes of course to have fun!
Nice post!

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-11-13 03:22 PM


Much love and strength to you Julie.
ThisDiamond

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4 posted 2002-11-13 04:03 PM


Julie, you have my heartfelt condolences and prayers.
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5 posted 2002-11-13 04:07 PM


I'm so sorry you are hurting..... (((hugs))) for you
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6 posted 2002-11-13 08:25 PM




(big hugggssssssss) My thoughts and prayers go out to you, sweet friend, death is inevitable but so is the love and it lasting forever, for she is looking down from heaven now and will always loe you and never forget you as a family's love never dies! (sigh) She's always with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Connel
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7 posted 2002-11-13 08:40 PM


Read one of my poems called What Is death... I wrote it for people like you, people who have lost loved ones.. Take a look at it.. It just may make you feel better.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

regards2you
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8 posted 2002-11-13 08:45 PM




My thoughts and prayers go out to you Julie. May you find strength and peace of mind.

Hugs to you,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

majnu
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9 posted 2002-11-13 10:44 PM


my condolances.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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