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Auguste
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0 posted 2002-11-13 04:17 PM



It's so often easy for me
To write of love and speak of dreams
And I'll even write a fun poem
Avoid the serious, it seems

Yes, we all want entertainment
Life's too serious as it is
But some things I feel must be said
And so I'd like to tell you this

So many bright-eyed children weep
In fear, in hunger and much more
Their lives are broken, and they, too
Such sadness comes with being poor

Their clothes are secondhand, at best
And other kids so like to pick
These precious hearts find little rest
There is no doctor when they're sick

Their meal is beans, or rice, what's cheap
A diet that will not help them grow
They're all around us, yet we're blind
These tiny ones with hearts aglow

How we spend so much at Christmas
A celebration it must be
So many gifts and stacked so high
While for some kids there is no tree

We push our plates back, we're too full
Buy leather jackets, a silk shirt
Some children raid dumpsters for food
Because their empty stomachs hurt

How dare we forget such as these
And not give them a chance to dream
Not feed them so that they can sleep
They're not like us, so it would seem

But just like us, each one of them
With eyes that shine and smiles that light
Your heart up like a Chriistmas tree
Keep them in mind, please don't lose sight

At least supply their basic needs
Toys, clothes and some food to eat
A doctor when they come down sick
And in the winter give them heat

But most of all, give them yourself
Don't hide your heart, please show you care
And let them know they're valued much
And of your willingness to share

So blessed we are that we forget
That others struggle just to eat
As we live air conditioned lives
And live in homes with central heat

This poem's not meant to worry you
But only open eyes to see
How precious all these children are
Each child could have been you or me



© Copyright 2002 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-13 04:21 PM


Thank you dear Michael for the repost!
And a very timely one it is with the holidays just around the corner.
God Bless the Children.
~Hugs gentle man~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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2 posted 2002-11-13 04:23 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Michael, God Bless You, children to me are Gods most beautiful creation and my heart cries to see so many not given the love and attention they need, abused, or without loved ones to watch over them! (big hugggsssssss) I dream ever so much of working with children when I grow up and attending to special childrens needs! (wipes tears) My prayers are with all our children of the world and may God grace them all with innocence and love never to wilt away, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-13 04:31 PM


I didn't get to see this the first round...happy to have read it this time.
Well done. ThisDiamond

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4 posted 2002-11-13 04:36 PM


Michael,I appreciate your words here.
Well done, and very meaningful.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-11-13 11:04 PM




This is wonderful, Michael, thank you, and I could not agree more.


Warm Regards,
Pat

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6 posted 2002-11-13 11:07 PM


Thanks for re-posting this gem, Michael...
I missed it the first time around, and it is a very important subject.... very well written too!
~ a heart full of hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-11-13 11:16 PM



You deserve a big for this wonderful poem!  You have a heart of gold m'friend and I wholeheartedly agree with your words  

I'm keeping this!

Take care,
Melissa~


"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

[This message has been edited by Honeybee (11-13-2002 11:17 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-11-13 11:21 PM


Well done and heartfelt Michael. Chris
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