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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-11 12:52 PM



I wonder was I painting away
my life. Each brush stroke
an obliteration of what reality
forcibly made of me in portrait,
collage of persona. Multifaceted,
I am the fly-eyed view of too
many, too many. With each new
creation of canvas, displacement
in sense, vacation from life
was acheived in stroke.

WhiteRose 11/11/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-11 01:21 PM


Anne, a very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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2 posted 2002-11-11 03:27 PM




(sigh) Oh Anne, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too love these vacations and wish I could dream all day if I had the opportunity and paint with my fingers, this is gorgeous, we al love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-11-11 04:30 PM


Thank you Ethel, for reading and responding.

Noah, as always you are so kind in your response. Thank you

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