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Angel’s light
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Angel’s light |
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BabyGirl721 Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 12California, USA |
You hide in the dark You don’t care about the world So you hide far far away You want to die You think no one cares anymore But someone does An angel She’s far You can’t reach her You want to so bad She’s the only one that understands you, Cares about you, Wants to be there for you, Be your best friend for a lifetime Don’t fade away Try, Try really hard Be strong The angel knows you’re strong So hang in there The time will come for you For you to be happy, In love, And just enjoy life |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very nice message here in your first poem as nothing is gained by giving up that is for sure. Please check your email for a nice surprise and welcome to Passions, I know you will enjoy it here. Please take time to familiarize yourself with the guidelines and check out all the different forums to post in. There is a lot to see, and read in here worthwhile. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Knowing about what one want's is close enough to Heaven for me. I like this poem. Thank you. etoodog |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BabyGirl721~ Welcome.  Such a lovely and heartfelt write for your introductory post. Very nicely penned. I enjoyed this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions babygirl. Sometimes letting someone know that we care is something they need. This is a caring thoughtful write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you send angel hugs out to everyone in this gorgeous compassionate debut, this is wonderfully uplifting and gave me a smile, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles Nancy~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 ...believe what your heart feels... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. A superb entrance. Look forward to reading more of your work. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hi! Welcome to Pips. Hope you enjoy your new second home. |
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BabyGirl721 Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 12California, USA |
Thank you so much for your sweet words and inspiration. I will continue writing. Thanks for welcoming me, I know I will love it here and it will give a chance to express myself. Thanks again. |
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