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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-11-06 07:10 PM


Standing upon a shore, gazing,
the taste of salt upon my lips.
From tears, or perhaps from
the brine of blue?

Sounds of distant bells, bells
of the sea, the sailor...two
bells, or was it four? Alas,
but at times the waves mask
the sound, a sound so very
captivating to one who has
rode the sea, countless waves
that have gently pushed against
a ship’s bow, nudging one in
reminder of where nature is
and which the boss, calling
the cards..

Remembering the rush of air
escaping from the vents, the
plume of spray, miniature
rainbows heralding the
departure into the deep, the
silent deep...where calm
pervades and invades...

O but to ride the blue of wave,
the depths of a savage ocean
once again...just once more.
To walk the steel hull of doom
and enter the world of what was
once the life of me...my destiny.

Sadly, standing on that shore,
looking into the darkness,
seeing the lights....red to port,
green to starboard....red on
right returning....red is stop,
green is go....all those times
seeing those lights...some huge,
some small....all so fascinating..
So intriguing to a sailor...

Into the depths of sea I go
Into the briny deep so blue
Into the heart of sailors though
my heart remains with you...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (11-06-2002 07:11 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-06 07:13 PM


You are very talented.. Im really starting to like your poems!


Not that i didnt like them before.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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2 posted 2002-11-06 07:14 PM



Into the depths of sea I go
Into the briny deep so blue
Into the heart of sailors though
my heart remains with you...
The perfect way to top it off Barry.  Your words seem so haunting.....nicely done.

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3 posted 2002-11-06 07:18 PM



You dug this out
of your long ago...
it says so...

paladin
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4 posted 2002-11-06 08:17 PM


The sea is a mistress that seduces the soul of a young man.Come go with me I will show you things you have never seen.

paladin

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5 posted 2002-11-06 08:34 PM


Barry,
You just keep getting better and better.
So just keep writing.

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6 posted 2002-11-06 09:49 PM


Barry, this is wonderful. A look into your life that I enjoyed.
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7 posted 2002-11-06 09:53 PM


Barry you have the soul of a sailor..
You truly love the sea..and it shows.
Well done.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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8 posted 2002-11-06 10:20 PM


Living at the sea, I know these feelings well and you've done such a wonderful job of expressing them.  Wanna go shrimping with me tomorrow?

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Magnus
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9 posted 2002-11-06 10:27 PM


Michael (Auguste),  I would be honored to..
wish it could be a reality....

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10 posted 2002-11-06 10:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Barry, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, ship ahoy!!! (big hugggssssss) Your gorgeous words always take us over the dry tortugas and beyond, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-06-2002 10:38 PM).]

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-11-06 10:41 PM


So well done...speechless. ThisDiamond
MARK V SHELDON
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12 posted 2002-11-06 11:19 PM


A vicarious memory, but real nonetheless...  The soul touches on yearnings all have felt, regardless of individual experiences...  

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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13 posted 2002-11-06 11:26 PM


Ahhhh so the sea captivates you too!..This was wonderfully penned emotions!
I have sea fever too..obviously..hehe
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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14 posted 2002-11-06 11:43 PM


Barry,

This is a very good poem. Thank you for sharing.

                   Dawn

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15 posted 2002-11-07 11:20 AM


Magnus darling heart I saw this earlier and of course read it right there and then, but waited till it slipped a bit so I could do ‘Bev de Bump’s’ job and give it the bump it so richly deserves. There are those who may read and not be stunned by the talent and the amazing fluidity of this wonderful poem of your soul, but I cannot imagine whom they may be.

When I read this I was initially shocked, or more precisely astounded, I knew that your writing was beautiful, but this is truly outstanding. The way you have written this fills me with real awe, the beauty the essence of the spirit is perfectly displayed and only a writer of your calibre could have achieved this wonder.

You know I love this utterly utterly utterly and YOU darling heart are a writer of really beautiful lines of truth, this is superbly done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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16 posted 2002-11-07 11:46 AM


Barry

"O but to ride the blue of wave,
the depths of a savage ocean
once again...just once more."

It seems you do just that, your memory so clear with the haunting that you took me there.  Wonderful write!

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17 posted 2002-11-07 01:15 PM


Barry, you are amongst the best of the best !!! A giant among poets. I feel so little on the pages of blue amidst you and the other talented writers here. thanks so much for sharing your talents with me, though.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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