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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-04 07:49 PM

Open

each breath
you take
summons
my heart
and I try
but cannot
conceal
my emotions
for I do not
know how
to love
silently

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-04 07:51 PM

Nice... it a little short,.. But the shorter the easier to remember i guess.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-11-04 08:51 PM

for I do not
know how
to love
silently
________________
Beautiful words here Helen!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-04 10:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, may your love make music like the doves and flit liely like the hummingbirds! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

4 posted 2002-11-04 10:12 PM

I imagine this silence as an expression of a wild beating passion, or a simple talk alone. Anyway, your words ring clear. Thank you.

etoodog

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-11-05 03:27 AM

one I love silently...but it's hard.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-05 12:21 PM

Helen, as I guess everyone that's read my poems can tell,
I, too, cannot "love silently".
Thanks for sharing. I like it.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

Faye
Junior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 14
The world of Dreams&Memories

7 posted 2002-11-05 01:41 PM

Love is audicious... It reminds me of Sense and Sensebillity... Or maybe I just read too much. "Love with your being; not just your heart."

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