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0 posted 2002-11-02 12:11 PM


Woke up this beautiful day
feeling fine
For you, my sweet, darling Love
are right here on my mind

You, on my mind is nothing
unusual for me
More excited I'll feel as this
next week does proceed

For to be with you, I'll go this
next weekend
Some quality time together, we
fully do intend

Between visits, we miss each other so deeply,
truly our hearts ache
Anticipation of being together surely
helps them not to break

Sadly, my sweet Love, this is all
we have for now
Hopefully, these miles between us will
change soon, somehow

Until then, Sweetheart, love letters and phone
calls each and every day
Keeping our dreams and hopes alive, for our
love will always stay

Whatever situation and circumstace we happen
into, our love will help us cope
And keep our hearts as one, with confidence,
trust, faith, and forever hope



© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-02 12:59 PM


garysgirl - I do know these thoughts well. Very nice to yearn for someone special///

BC

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2 posted 2002-11-02 01:17 PM


Oh yes, Bill. The heartache of missing
your Love being right beside you can
be almost unbearable at times, can't it?
Thanks for reading my poem and for your reply.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
               Ethel

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3 posted 2002-11-02 02:08 PM


Certainly sounds like a love poem to me.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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4 posted 2002-11-02 02:12 PM


Well, hello, Michael!! I haven't seen
you around much lately. I hope you're
posting a poem today. You write such
beautiful poetry, friend.
Thanks for reading my poem and for
your reply. It's much appreciated.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
               Ethel

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5 posted 2002-11-02 02:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes as I share this kind of feeling you do, yearning for my Joanna who I love so very much from thousands of miles apart and she loves me in return! (sigh) I know your love will only grow stronger as his for you will and He decided to make you far apart at first so to show that no obstacle or distance can steal your love and your love will be the best it could ever be, I truly believe this for both of you! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you will meet him, I have 100% faith in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-11-02 06:19 PM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2002-11-02 06:26 PM


Oh Ethel...I'm so glad you're going to be seeing your Gary soon....the loneliness must be so terrible at times.
Enjoy every moment you're together.
Beautiful romantic write sweetie.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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8 posted 2002-11-02 07:05 PM


Noah, thanks so much for your sweet reply.
I know that you understand how I feel, because
you feel so much love for your Joanna.
Thank you, sweet Noah.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
               Ethel

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9 posted 2002-11-02 07:08 PM


James,
thanks so much for reading
my poem. You are so sweet. Thanks
for you reply, too. You're so
sweet. I love your romantic poems, too.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
               Ethel

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10 posted 2002-11-02 07:16 PM


Ethel, enjoyed the reading of words from the heart, I am sure the distance will soon close and the touch of tenderness then be warm and true.

Sincerely
Rick

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11 posted 2002-11-02 07:20 PM


Nancy Lee,
thanks so much, sweet
lady. I appreciate you
reading my poem. Oh, yeah,
we will enjoy every single minute
that we're together. Thanks

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
               Ethel

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12 posted 2002-11-02 07:56 PM


Ethel, I'm so excited for both of you that I can barely wait till you two are together once again. Enjoy every single second and giggle, dance and love each other to the fullest.

Yippee, Ethel gets to see her Gary. Now if we could just get Noah and Joanna together.  

Hugs and fun, Marti

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13 posted 2002-11-05 12:48 PM


Rick, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your sweet reply.
I will be so glad when we can be together all the time
and won't ever have to be apart again.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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14 posted 2002-11-05 12:51 PM


Sweet Marti, thank you for reading my poem and for your sweet reply.
Oh yes, we will make the most out of every second we're together.

Yeah, I'll be so glad when Joanna and Noah can see each other.
Aren't they cute?

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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15 posted 2002-11-06 01:02 AM


It's nice to look forward to the time together.

Make the most of it!
(well you probably don't need me to tell you that)

I liked your poem a lot~


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16 posted 2002-11-06 02:08 AM


Lori, thank you for reading my poem and for you sweet reply. Oh yes, we try to make the most of every minute we're together.
Thanks

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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17 posted 2002-11-07 01:51 AM



garysgirl~
This is such a lovely and heartfelt piece.
I truly enjoyed reading this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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18 posted 2002-11-07 08:51 AM


seconds turn into minutes,
minutes turn into hours
hours turn into days,
days turn into yrs
years turn into forever

wishing u happiness

enjoyed


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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19 posted 2002-11-07 09:25 AM


Vicky, thanks so much for reading my poem. I really appreciate your reply. I love reading your poems.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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20 posted 2002-11-07 09:27 AM


Bernie, thanks so very much for your reply. I really loved the way you wrote it. Very good.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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