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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-31 04:23 AM


Tonight

I would like to spend
tonight with you.
I will do anything
you want me to do.
I promise.
Of course you must
promise me too.
And if you do.
I promise
tonight
to you.

JamesLee
October30
2002

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-10-31 01:19 PM


JamesMichael~
Oh .... such a lovely promise~
Most enjoyable read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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akira
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2 posted 2002-10-31 01:23 PM


Wonderful poem...was it written for someone special? its so very sweet...

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3 posted 2002-10-31 01:25 PM


Oh yes...love those promises!
Very nice James!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-10-31 01:28 PM


Promises how lovely the expectaions of these promises - loved the poem - Paul
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5 posted 2002-10-31 01:29 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may your love always fulfill your heart with promises of faith and trust! (big huggsgsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-10-31 03:08 PM


AAAAAAWWWWWW, this is SSOOOOOOO  sweet, JamesMichael. She's got to love you with all these sweet love poems you're writing. Thanks for sharing.

Love to All,
Ethel

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7 posted 2002-10-31 04:24 PM


A promise is a contract of love...signed by the heart...

...believe what your heart feels...

LngJhnAg
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8 posted 2002-10-31 04:27 PM


Yanno, James - This sweet poem is almost too much for me to keep from responding to with a poem "made you for you."  I won't do it right now, but you're close to getting it, son - lol.
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9 posted 2002-10-31 05:32 PM


nice
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10 posted 2002-10-31 06:39 PM


You capture the spirit of what love is all about. There could not be a better night. Thank you.

etoodog

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