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Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-10-29 07:05 PM


My heart swells with love and pride at the thought of you as my wife
You're the one I've been waiting for all of my life
The tears fall so easily, but it's only because I love you so much
What I wouldn't give for another kiss, to bask in your loving touch

When you say you love me, I feel it with your heart and soul
When we are together, two parts become one entire whole
The world can fall apart, I won't care what happens tomorrow
For I have today with you, and happiness drowns out all and any sorrow

Peace has entered my heart, and I can sing once more
As love lifts me off the ground, and I feel myself soar
You are the most precious gift I've yet to receive
I knew we would make it to here--all we had to do was believe

Soon I will be in your arms, and we can put the rest far behind
As our love is now etched forever in the hands of time
We don't even have to speak, we've come to this place where we just know
Still though each and everyday to you, my love I will show

There will come a day, and it will be soon, that we are no longer apart
Our love will be joined together, body, soul, and heart
God has witnessed our love, now that he has blessed it too
There's just one thing left for me to say..."I Love You"

Happy 14 months Jena

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-29 07:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes because me and my Joanna have loved each other for a year now from over 2000 miles apart and I dream ever so much to have her, more than anything in the whole world! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I wish you and Jena endless years of happiness together, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-10-29 07:59 PM


I hope to feel that kind of peace some day

As always you write from the heart  

hugs
M

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-10-29 10:11 PM


Amy darling lil’ sis of my heart I really love this, you are so remarkable perceptive that you of course know this. Absolutely exquisite writing and it is simply divine. The touch of your words fluttering within the spirit of this, rise from the page to dance in lyrical wonder into the very stuff of my soul. I truly am breathless with delight, truly you write with starlight.

You really are an amazing poet, this is breathtakingly lovely


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

jenab75703
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 7

4 posted 2002-11-01 08:47 PM


Amy,

This was a beautiful tribute to our wonderful 14 months together. I love you so much baby girl and i look forward to celebrating all the anniversaries to come. Thank you for loving me as you do!!

All My Love,
  Jena

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

5 posted 2002-11-02 11:19 PM


Amy,

Congratulations!

As Always,

Laura

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-11-02 11:40 PM


A hearty congratulations, Amy
~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-11-03 07:02 AM


Amy,
it sounds as if things are coming together for you. I am so happy, not only for your love but also because it means you write wonderful poetry like this gem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2002-11-03 07:17 PM


I had to have another read of a poem that needs celebration for you.

hugs
M

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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9 posted 2002-11-03 07:55 PM


youre at your best with your heart on your sleeve....
Happy Anniversary Amy and Jenna

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

Dark Angel
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Posts 10095

10 posted 2002-11-03 09:54 PM


Congratulations and Happy Anniversary.

hugs to you both

Maree

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
11 posted 2002-11-03 09:59 PM


Amy this is so beautiful
and I'm very happy things are working out for you and Jena.
~Hugs to you both~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
12 posted 2002-11-04 12:23 PM


Wishing you as many years of the same as you have had weeks.

Hugs and a kotc

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

13 posted 2002-11-04 12:56 PM


Aimster,

Congratulations, lucky you and lucky Jena.

Wonderful poem.

SimplyGold

Connel
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14 posted 2002-11-04 01:00 AM


Amy,
That was a very good..
I hope you post more peoms..

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