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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-27 08:25 PM



Right now I'd like to savor
cherry jello on my tongue  
with chocolate whipped cream
on the top just for fun,
with sweet apple cider
to add zing to the lips
only just a little

s
  i  
    p,

autumn flavors, slightly chilled.

WhiteRose 10/27/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-10-27 09:03 PM


Hmmm...tasted the colors.
ThisDiamond

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-10-27 09:10 PM


This is really very delightful, White Rose.
Your imagery is extremely vivid and very effective in this poem.  ***Ivy Rose

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-10-27 09:44 PM


what a tasty poem, Anne!

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-10-27 10:10 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Or with pumpkin pie, yay, now that's autumn spirit! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous tasty poemn, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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