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I MISS YOU MORE THAN
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I MISS YOU MORE THAN |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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I miss you more than stars in the sky shining, sparkling stars I miss you more than heat from the sun hot, beaming rays I miss you more than water in the oceans deep, blue water I miss you more than sand on the beach white, countless grains I miss you more than trees in the forest large, tall trees I miss you more than rain drops in a storm large, heavy drops I miss you more than words of lovers sweet, endearing passionate I miss you more than birds in the sky numerous, high flying I miss you more than clouds up above blue, clear heavenly I miss you more than words can describe loving, adoring feelings [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-27-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem. This reminds me of how I feel when Liam isn't around. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue...Thank you, for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-25-2002 12:38 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, it's hard to miss someone so much, isn't it? But, I'm glad that I have someone to love so much that I do yearn to be with him ever second. Aren't you? Thanks for your reply. Love To All, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is a very tender and sweet love poem. I feel that the time spent missing a loved one can intensify the feelings of love and the longing is bitter sweet---and the reunions can be incredibly intense and passionate. tehe Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Linda, I do believe that "absence makes the heart grow fonder"...sometimes, anyway. I do know, though, that it does make the times together SOOOOOO sweet. HaHa!! thanks for reading and for your reply, sweet lady. Love to All, Ethel |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Very Nice Yhankyou J |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very well written gal.....yanno...I've noticed alot of people here have missed me too.....(But I've also noticed, many wish they were better shots).......I just can't understand why everyone always picks on me?...Can you?..After all, I'm quiet, shy, sweet, kind, gentle, wall-flowerish etc?..Humble...all that stuff...???? [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-25-2002 04:29 PM).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely "miss you" poem.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Stubby....thank you very much. I appreciate your reading my poem and for your reply. Mr. Toe....I know you're kidding....or are you?!? Anyway, you REALLY ARE all those things you mentioned, Mr. Southern Gentleman. As hard as you try, you can't hide it. You are also a VERY good sport. Thank you for your reply. Munda....thanks so very much. I appreciate your kind words. I really do thank you all.... Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope this is not a current feeling and you are Gary are now closer than ever, sweet friend, I wish true happiness to always fill both your hearts, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thanks, dear friend, for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. Gary and I are forever close in heart and mind....just not physically. We hope it will be soon that we are together in every way. Thanks for caring, dear friend. Love To All, Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww Ethel ... I sure hope you and Gary can be together real soon. It's so hard to be separated. A loving poem -- Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marti, dear friend, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it very much. Love To All, Ethel |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great write I hope someone misses me some day this way.... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, just hold on, someone will. You are a very sweet, kind-hearted person, and I know if I can see that just from being on this site, that someone really special is going to see it, too. I hope it will be a true, "Forever Love", too. thanks for reading my poem and for your reply. Love To All, Ethel |
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