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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-10-22 10:19 PM


In the night a distant howl
as wind swept leaves fell to earth.
Shivers overcame my senses
as my mind reeled....

What comes from the dark
of bleakest night?
Arriving on rasping steps
ominous as doom.

“Hark!”, I called...who this be?
Silence answered....
Only silence...

Shadows walked the window pane
as shutters clashed and thunder
rolled...  Lightning streaks casting
stark death in my face....

Those eyes...eyes glaring in
through the portal....Unblinking
and demonic,   shudders come
over me...

Will the hours pass or end?  Will
time take life away?  
Will I survive....or die?

The knob of a latched door, turning
ever slowly....stopping...then moving...
once more...

Fear....overcomes the silent scream
within my mind as eyes see.....

The latch chain....swinging freely...
As a crack appears within the door...
Opening....  

Who, what.....  what might be at
this hour....creeping in the dark of
night...among the howling winds?

“Mr. M.?....It’s me...Herman....you called.....
Your pizza is here.”

Darkness invades the mind.....falling to the
floor....fainting.......

As the wind howls....and a pizza gets cold....

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-22 10:27 PM


Oh Barry!  You had me half scared to death..
Then it turns out to be the pizza delivery man!!
Excellent tale m'fiend..I mean friend.
~Hugs, Nancy~

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-10-22 10:30 PM


Another good one...with gusto Mag!
The eyes in the window...that would be mwaaaa...words of wisdom...
"NEVER, let a shalt a good pizza grow cold"
Grins...
ThisDiamond

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-10-22 10:30 PM


Barry - dat be da pizza man mun? Great write...

BC

Soleil Noir
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4 posted 2002-10-23 01:52 PM



Smiling...it takes some cleverness
to do Hallowe'en so very well...

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5 posted 2002-10-23 01:53 PM


Very well done Barry!  I just love this.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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6 posted 2002-10-23 02:22 PM


Good grief!! You really had me going there for awhile dear Magnus!! lol. Enjoyed. Chris

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Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-10-23 02:25 PM


~~  *  ~~

The night is dark
The night not still
And with the winds
Does come a chill

The knob does turn
So great's my fright
I cower in shadows
This Hall'ween nite

Shadows lurking
I cower in fear
Then came a voice,
"Your pizza's here!"

~~  *  ~~

Earth Angel

Toerag
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Ala bam a
8 posted 2002-10-23 02:27 PM


Then...the scariest part of all...Balladeer hands ya the bill......and you start howling.....good write Maggie...always enjoy your mind...
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