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Tell Her Your Heart

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SEA
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0 posted 10-21-2002 09:50 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




And with the touch of feather’s quill
To parchment , flow of ink
Words to make beating hearts still
Cleverest of minds, think

Touch now the book, leather bound
Fill more than your eyes
This treasure rare, found
Centuries old, without revise

First edition, only book ever wrote
And here, dedication
To his love, in lavish denote
Romantic in revelation

His love, vivid devotion
Ever, my heart does weep
Swept away with emotion
I shall forever keep

Fragile, his testimony
Words of love, too late spoken
Aching with, “if only”
Timeless words, now a token

Speak, without hesitation
‘fore she should depart
Without reservation
Tell her, tell her your heart

~SEA~


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1 posted 10-21-2002 09:53 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) Oh Susan, it's so great to see you again, yay, I have missed your smile so so much! It is so sad to see so many show unrequited love and I encourage all to share heir hearts to the ones they love and find a response of certainty and love in return! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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highways, & byways, for now


2 posted 10-21-2002 09:55 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

SEA - I touched the book, my heart wept but then smiled as I saw her there. Lovely write SEA...

BC
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3 posted 10-21-2002 09:58 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Hi Susan...so nice to see you!
I love this, and how true...
we should tell those we love how we feel now..
rather than later to be left thinking...'if only'
Very beautifully penned...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 10-21-2002 10:06 PM       View Profile for WhileIWasGone   Email WhileIWasGone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhileIWasGone

Beautiful poem....and Beautiful picture.

Enjoyed so much.

DeaDiAmore
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5 posted 10-21-2002 10:32 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Such pretty images this gives me, sweetie.   A very good choice of a picture, too.  *hugs* and

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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6 posted 10-21-2002 10:50 PM       View Profile for ShadowRider   Email ShadowRider   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShadowRider

SeaGal,
just last week, i felt attracted to a print, painted by Mary Cassatt, that struck me:  the eyes like Mona Lisa.  It was if, just your poem did just a few minutes ago, like someone was able to open my feelings from a locked vault, and let it melt over the image.
Jeff
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Noah~ thank you dear heart

BC~ so glad you liked this one

Nancy~ thank you for reading and enjoying

DeaDiAmore~thank you

Michael~ thank you very much

Jeff~ thank you so much for your wonderful reply, you made me smile
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Every day, this is what is needed.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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9 posted 10-22-2002 08:23 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Susan this is so very lovely not to mention so very well done.  The graphic is perfectly matched to your words.  Hugs.
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10 posted 10-22-2002 08:28 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

SEA
Nice to see you posting again and a lovely one at that.
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11 posted 10-22-2002 09:04 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

as usual.. lovely work.. so nice to see you again gracing us with the beauty of your heart.
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12 posted 10-22-2002 10:07 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

liked it
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13 posted 10-22-2002 10:09 AM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

SEA - this is beautiful. So nice to read your work once again. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Speak, without hesitation
‘fore she should depart
Without reservation
Tell her, tell her your heart

he who hesitates is lost and I never wish to regret it.  Good to see you SEA~ and thank you for never failing to strike a chord.  
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With your feather quill you touch me.

EA
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16 posted 10-23-2002 11:46 PM       View Profile for FuzzyFrazzledFraggle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FuzzyFrazzledFraggle

just magic, loved it

Consider yourself fuzzed

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..SEA../\..thanks, enjoyed reading; poem is

very good; songlike../\..Spiros


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18 posted 10-24-2002 01:07 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Anne, this is a very beautiful poem...but so sad to me. We should never fail to tell people we love them (if we, in fact, do), because we never know if we'll have another chance. Thanks for sharing your  poem.

Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-24-2002 01:12 AM).]

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19 posted 10-24-2002 02:52 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Susan,

as always such beauty from you. this was
just so charming and romantic...then again
there is no romance poem like a Sea-poem!
just gorgeous hon, but then again so is your
heart, so how could this not be.
love you.
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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nice
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This is so special and the picture is just stunning.

Very nice writing ... Marti

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Fabulous...James
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SEA~ Very lovely poem.
What treasures we find in old diaries, dresser drawers and attics...Paul
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This is so beautiful, SEA! Both, the picture and the poem.
 
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