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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-20 10:51 PM



Picture Me

desire paints
itself in
a yellow pastel
when red
is the shade where
my passions dwell
stir me
blend
all my hue
where sheets
are brushed
by you


I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-20 10:59 PM


Beautiful imagery here

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-20 11:00 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully gentle, sweet friend, I love it, you always paint such soft and gorgeous hues with your words, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
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3 posted 2002-10-20 11:40 PM


The palette of you

Again, nice.

Ed

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4 posted 2002-10-20 11:48 PM


This is very beautiful, Helen. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

Robert Adamson
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5 posted 2002-10-21 03:10 AM


Wow, your words like to echo around me. Thank you.

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