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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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0 posted 2002-10-21 01:15 AM




Tonight
I want to be in love
I want to taste the stars
And rid my dreams
Of these nasty cliches
That cling onto my memory

Tonight
I want to shed
My naked vulnerability
Bathe beneath
Faerie tale dreams
And let the world
Know that I'm tired of waiting
Sitting around for an eternity
Wallowing in my newborn naivite

Tonight
I want to be loved
Send out a memo
Send out an email
To the angels in heaven
To let them know
That it doesn't matter
If we are seperated by a couple thousand miles
Or even by an ocean
Because...
Tonight
I want to let him know
That he's in my dreams..


Consider yourself fuzzed

[This message has been edited by FuzzyFrazzledFraggle (10-21-2002 01:34 AM).]

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Robert Adamson
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1 posted 2002-10-21 02:58 AM


I like one word titles and thought alot was said here. Thank you.

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2 posted 2002-10-21 03:03 AM


Superb.

(that's all I got for now, my friend). A rather enjoyed read.

Sincerely,
Titus

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

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