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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I had this romantic notion once to be Hemingway vodka in hand ocean in view writing through the demons until, I remembered the part of being alone I’d never mastered it’s lonely if I have to wake up Hemingway, tomorrow could I please still have the view? [This message has been edited by Duncan (10-15-2002 02:32 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I particularly enjoyed the last Stanza... as I read it through your eyes, and need, and then read it through your thoughts... Thank you, Duncan!  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
 That's the closest I could find for an ocean for you...pretend it's the real thing okay?  You can never win or lose |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... please at least make sure I have a view... nicely done my friend. Always a pleasure.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And let me have some room to see too as this sure would be a wild fantasy and high life to live! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always reveal such wonderful realms, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
if I have to wake up Hemingway, tomorrow could I please still have the view? --------------------------------- Wonderful Duncan! Especially loved the above lines.. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even if you did not wake up as Hemmingway on the morrow, you truly would have no need for a view of the ocean, because, Dear Duncan, you could surely write one into being! EA |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Yes, at least allow me beauty... excellent, Duncan, enjoyed! ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
until, I remembered the part of being alone I'd never mastered it's lonely ========================== time after time you write me.....   and...have to have one at night... oh yes...the night.........  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan Any view is not the same, alone. I like the way you write...simple-profound! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'll share my ocean view with you sometime and even my boat. Nicely penned!  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
well now, this is different for you... but no less for that. it still (of course) has the melancholy view that i always associate with, yet also stretches a bit outside yourself to encompass a layer of intentions. i have to admire that. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, melancholy...but very effectively written....feels right for the words... Nicely done.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - yes, you can still have the view, I'll make sure of it, nice write... BC |
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