A Girl and The Ghost prt. 2

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-13 09:56 PM

So the ghost sat
At the edge of her bed
He made no indent

He started to speak
And tell his story
"Her hair was as yellow
As yellow roses
Her eyes were as blue
As the deep blue sea
She was the most beautiful woman
I ever did see"
A smile came to his face

The girl said,
"Go on mister ghost.
I must hear more.
I want to hear
Everything."

He went on and said,
"I loved her
With my whole heart,
My whole soul
And my whole mind.
I did everything
She asked of me
Until I died."
He lowered his head sadly

Then the girl asked,
"How is it you died?
And why do you still haunt my room?
That is all I ask
For the moment kind ghost."

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I am doing this story in parts. I do hope you are enjoying Part 3 will be up tomorrow sometime.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-10-13 10:04 PM

the_loner_23 - now you have my interest up. Waiting for Part III...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-10-13 10:31 PM

Yes... I can't stand the suspense... hurry and write part 3 Julie...

~ vampire hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-13 11:41 PM

Don't forget to write and post part three---you promised! Can't leave us hanging in suspense!

EA

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-14 02:30 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...now I am at the edge of my seat, oh no, whatever evil and manipulation will the ghost put on her, or maybe he'll just ask her to pledge! (big hugggsssss) This is delightfully terrifying, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-14-2002 02:34 PM).]

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-10-14 02:56 PM

Suspense-filled poem. One of mystery and ghostly lore. ***Ivy Rose

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

6 posted 2002-10-15 02:36 PM

Awesome work as usual Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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