A Girl and The Ghost prt. 1

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-13 12:09 PM

A girl had been hearing
Strang noises in her room
Since they moved in the house
But it never bugged her
Because she thought it cool
If there was a ghost in her room

One night she saw a shadow
She put the covers over her head
And to scare whatever it was
She screamed, "BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"

She heard a shriek
And pulled down the covers
She saw the ghost run
For cover
In her closet

She snuck out of bed
And over to the closet
She opened the door
And stared at the ghost of a young man

She said to the ghost,
"What is it you want?"
The ghost answered back
"I thought you were my girlfriend."
The girl smiled
And motioned for him to come out

She crawled into bed and said,
"Tell me the story of your girlfriend.
For she has probably been long dead."

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Part 2 will come at a later date. But I hope you enjoy this part.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-10-13 12:25 PM

Thanx!!!!! (with a grin)....I always like
two part stories that leave one hanging
after the first part...In this, you have
done exceedingly well.....

Patiently waiting for part two....
Yeah, right!

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

2 posted 2002-10-13 12:32 PM

Hey there Sue,

Beware of these types of ghosts. They speak with a "forked" tongue

Hee Hee

SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-13 05:22 PM

(sigh) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, ooohhhhhh...what a great cliffhanger, I love it, can't wait for the 2nd part, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!