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chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

0 posted 2003-07-27 04:03 PM

I think of the first time we ever met
and from the on i knew my heart was set,
I loved you so much but you couldn`t see
that you meant the world to me.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2003-07-27 04:31 PM

This is such a wonderful and beautiful first poem it makes such a nice first post. I hope we get to see more of your work.

Welcome to Passions

Andy

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

2 posted 2003-07-27 04:52 PM

it is truly a befitting first post.nothing too much but cute and very sweet!i loved the poem and welcome to passions!hope to see more from u.

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-07-27 05:28 PM

first off, welcome to passions!!!!! and second, cute first post, looking forward to seeing more!

ri

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-07-27 08:02 PM

welcome! it was cute, a little on the short side, and lacking of some depth. But good attempt. Hope to see more from you.
~Lex..

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-07-27 09:42 PM

short and sweet, thats sooooo cute. hehe. im starting to get that jenifer laugh. damn. *please excuse hatred*

kj
Junior Member

since 2003-07-28

Posts 15
Australia

6 posted 2003-07-28 04:02 AM

thats sweet

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2003-07-28 06:02 AM

Cute.

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

8 posted 2003-07-28 07:32 AM

thanx for all your replies its gr8 to hear what you think! i`ll try to make my next poem longer and go in to more depth!

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

9 posted 2003-07-28 07:08 PM

that was a really good first post. short but simple... i like that. you didn't cloud it up with words.

~cassi

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

10 posted 2003-07-29 08:51 PM

Nice first post. Very simple, very sweet. Keep it up!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

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