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babygurl55 Junior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 18 |
Remembering all the good times we had Makes me get all teary eyed and sad. I loved you with all my heart, And now we have been torn apart. You filled my life with happiness and love, And now if we want to talk to each other you have to look above. You hated it when I lied, But I hated it the night I saw you cry. Death took me away into the sky, Now more then ever I wish I could have said goodbye. So coming from my heart and going out to you, I want you to know I have always loved you. Me and the Sun I am bright as the sun, Running around and having fun. Having no cares and no worries, But always hearing hurry, hurry, hurry My friends tell me to be like the moon, But they will all see soon. That I can not be who they want me to be, I can only be me. The moon is dark and gloomy, This leaves no room for me. So let them all believe, what they're going to believe, But the sun in my life will never leave. I know they will see soon, That I am not the moon. Life is life as they should see, So I will be who I want to be. My Dreams of You No words can express my love for you, And the color of your eyes, oh how blue. The way your laugh fills up a room, And the dreams at night of you as my groom. The moonlight falls upon your hair, And me at your side not believing I am there. My dress as white as the snow with flowers as red as a rose, When I awake I find that no one knows. I keep telling myself it's all in my head, Because everytime I awake alone in my bed. Lonely here thinking of you, Wondering if my dreams will ever come true. I see you the next day, And all of a sudden you start walking my way. As you walked on past, I asked myself, "Why didn't it last?" |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
I had trouble paying attention, but I've read it more than once and it's cute... it's honest to what you're thinking, so it's good. nice write ~cassi |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
Good write i really respect what your writing. Keep up the work I'll be sure to read more!  ~Tori Louise~ Be happy, and respectful, dont forget about those ones that will always love you no matter how much you screw up! |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
*hatred can say nothing except...* "good write" thats a good thing. |
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