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Teen Poetry #6

My Latest Mistake

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2003-01-22 08:19 PM

Agonising pain rips through me
It's not my fault
Unfairness shatters the silence
It's NOT my fault
Selfishness permeates the air
It's NOT my FAULT
It's yours.
Now GROW UP!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-01-22 08:30 PM

No, Rhonda...it's NOT your fault.
Keep writing it out.
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-01-22 10:44 PM

Ouch... The poor sod almost has my pity... You rock, woman.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-22 11:22 PM

That was a pretty cool poem.
I can sooooo o relate to that, omg!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2003-01-23 12:22 PM

A very intense peice, well worth the read

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

5 posted 2003-01-24 09:28 PM

great poem. i liked how it was written; really got the point across. very intense. two thumbs up!

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