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Teen Poetry #6

Too bad

Danielle
Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2003-01-20 12:16 PM

You were the first real love of my life
Too bad it was doomed from the start
We didn't have enough in common
And we always found time to fight
I know that you truly loved me
And that I truly loved you
That's why it hurts so much when it ended
I couldn't believe the things that wee said
But you told me I'd still have your friendship
And now I don't even have that
I'm going crazy with out you there fo me

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2003-01-20 06:35 PM

Awww, I'm so sorry.

I'm sorta going through the same thing, so i know how you feel... how bad it hurts.
I really hope that things get better for you!
Anyway, I liked this. It was true, and it explained all that you're feeling with a sort of flow to it.

Keep it up!

~xXsaraXx~

"Dreams are bad when all they do is leave the truth behind.
Dreams are bad when negativity's a state of mind."
-silverchair-

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