I - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #6

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

0 posted 2002-12-30 10:35 PM

This seems kind of unfinished to me... it's also really old. Eh whatever.

I will do what my heart desires.
I'll follow my dream.
I'll do what I want, and in my time.
I'll be my own team.

Before my days are over,
Before my time is done,
I'll do all I planned.
I haven't yet begun.

I'll wake up to see the sunrise,
And sleep when it sets.
I'll keep all my promises,
And make good on all my bets.

I'll catch and count the stars,
And give each a name.
I'll play all day and all night,
And win at my own game.

I'll walk in the pouring rain,
And when I am dry
I will fly with open wings,
And add my cloud to the sky.

[This message has been edited by OtherSideOfTheMirror (12-30-2002 10:37 PM).]

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2002-12-31 10:20 AM

I think that this is a really good work. I believe it is fine by itself.

"I'll walk in the pouring rain,
And when I am dry
I will fly with open wings,
And add my cloud to the sky"

I think we all would like our own cloud in the sky

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.