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Teen Poetry #6

This Deep Love

mindy
Junior Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 34
VA, US

0 posted 2002-12-30 03:37 PM

This Deep Love

His love is a huge part of my life.
I'm willing to put up this fight.
He gives me so much happiness...
Hardly ever brings me sadness.
He makes me feel like a person who is real.
Any lies or secrets he wouldn't conceal.
I'm willing to love him forever.
This deep love can keep us together.

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mindy

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-12-31 01:03 AM

Simple, yet sweet. I like how you kept it all together---and how, although short...it conveyed your emotions quite nicely. Good job!

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

2 posted 2002-12-31 10:21 AM

This is really heartfelt. It flows nicley and expresses your love very well.

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