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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2002-12-18 07:01 AM


"What I Mean Is ( I Wanna Spend The Rest Of My Life With You )"
(18/12/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Spin the bottle was a game that
We used to play when we were kids,
You remember when I got picked
Leaned over and gave me a kiss.
We're older now bit still smitten
Now we fool around on your couch,
We do all kinda stuff that your
Mother still refurre to as "auch".

Refrain
What I mean is...
I grew up loving you,
I grew up knowing you,
And now I wanna spend
The rest of my life with you.
Grow older loving you,
Grow older knowing you,
Because I wanna spend
The rest of my life with you.
What I mean is...
( I love you )

Verse 2
Wanna buy a house together
And have kids of our own someday,
Wanna have all the ups and downs
That relationship's have these days.
We'll feel our way forward as one
And let's take the first step tonight,
I won't push you, I'll support you
No matter what I'll fight your fight.

Refrain

Bridge
There's no other I feel for
Like the way I feel for you,
I know you feel the same too.
Want no one else in my life
Because I only want you,
I know you feel the same too.

Refrain

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
1 posted 2002-12-18 10:51 AM


Wonderful song.  What type of music did you aim for this to be?  When I read it it struck me as a country song but thats just me.  When you release your CD I want one!!  Good luck!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

Rainbowdust
Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2002-12-18 06:33 PM


Beautiful.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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