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BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

0 posted 2002-12-17 10:50 AM

I wonder
How long will you hang your hat up?
How long will your boots stay under my bed?
How long will you want me around?

I wonder
If you ment everything you said to me
If your touch held more than just wanting a good time
If your eyes held anything at all

I wonder
If I've walked into another dissapointment
If I have welcomed another heart break
If I have taken a promise that will be broken

I wonder
If this is really just a dream
If I'm going to wake up soon
If none of this is real

I wonder if you will hurt me
I wonder if you will break me
I wonder if you will lie to me
I wonder if you will leave me behind

I wonder if you will be just like all the others

I wonder

(Deticated to my cowboy Jeremy, please don't hurt me)

~*~*~Night Angel

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

1 posted 2002-12-17 03:57 PM

Good idea for a poem! I liked reading it. It could be even better if you relate it to a specific event or sumthing.. just a thought! :-D
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

2 posted 2002-12-17 06:08 PM

this is really good, I think people whose been hurt in a past relationship often think like this... GREAT WORK!

Best Wishes,

Brian.

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

3 posted 2002-12-18 10:21 AM

i like this ALOT....nice work...keep it up!

LIZ

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

hogsandkisses
New Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 1

4 posted 2002-12-18 08:29 PM

I loved this poem! At this point in time that is totlly how I feel about the guy that I'm seeing right now. Keep up the good work!

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

5 posted 2002-12-19 10:29 AM

hey.. i really liked this.. ALOT.. i got my heart broken and now i feel this way with a guy im dating now.. so i could really relate to it.. good luck with jeremy! very nice poem!!

RxyFxy04

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2002-12-20 12:29 PM

Great poem, I can really relate to it, Im always wondering when I first find someone for a friend or more if they're gonna hurt me in the end too.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

7 posted 2002-12-20 03:23 PM

Good poem.

I wonder if you will break me

Interesting words. Very good writing about a very common topic, but unique enough to keep reading.

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