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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2002-12-18 11:40 PM



Only you had a strength to fight my fears when I could not
Only you held my hand and lifted me when I fell
With Your kind eyes you healed my soul
With your stong arms you lifted me from the fire and waves and set me free on solid ground
Your the only one that could tell me my faults without hurting me
You listened to my problems without correcting my every word
You soothed the savage beast that rested in my tainted heart
I owe my life to you, I couldn't have survived on my own
Your love your care or willing spirit
Only you could make me the person I am, even with my faults

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

© Copyright 2002 Malloree - All Rights Reserved
mindy
Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34
VA, US
1 posted 2002-12-19 10:29 AM


This is a good poem! I think that it's always nice to write poems to those who help you out in life.Keep writing...
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2002-12-20 12:21 PM


That was a truly beautiful poem, wonderfully expressed! I need someone like that! Hope you showed it to whoever it's for, Im sure they'd appreciate it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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