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Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

0 posted 2002-12-14 11:22 PM

I think I know an angel
Whose heart must weigh a ton.
So many clinging onto it,
Then dropping-
One by one.

Every time a person falls,
They take a part of her.
By now shes had so many
That her future is a blur.

I think I know an angel,
But she has been abused.
I don't think she belongs here
To be hurt by the confused.

Written: 12/14/02
Dedication: To the angels on earth that have to put up with our [insert word that im not allowed to write but i dont feel like replacing]

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

[This message has been edited by Avis (12-15-2002 01:18 AM).]

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-12-14 11:54 PM

BOOTYFUL! I loved it!
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2002-12-15 05:16 PM

That was very well done! Fantastic and very cute.
Yay for you!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-12-15 11:46 PM

*applauds* I have nothing critical to say about this one at all. Beautiful write

Rj

"it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious"
~ Reena
I'm Rhondiforous!

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

4 posted 2002-12-16 01:37 PM

That was beautiful. Thank you.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

5 posted 2002-12-16 04:45 PM

this was really good!!!!!i really enjoyed reading it!!! i am going to be waiting for more!!!
###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

6 posted 2002-12-16 04:58 PM

B e a u t i f u l.. yet another great poem, keep em coming =))

shea

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

7 posted 2002-12-16 09:44 PM

loved it! :-D
very original and very touching.. keep your writes acomin! :-)!!
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

LesterVisaya
Junior Member

since 2002-11-16

Posts 21

8 posted 2002-12-16 11:30 PM

A poem writen about something so heavy with such ease..love it..

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

9 posted 2002-12-17 08:29 PM

*gasps* That was so beautiful! I really like alot of yours. Wonderful poem! Encore!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

10 posted 2002-12-18 04:27 PM

i loved this. I think i needed to hear a poem like this.
keep up the good work

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-12-21 05:39 AM

Avis~
This is such a beautiful write.
I absolutely love this.
You are quite a talented poet.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

12 posted 2002-12-21 03:46 PM

"I think I know an angel
Whose heart must weigh a ton.
So many clinging onto it,
Then dropping-
One by one."

Well written, sound's very professional. It's cute and meaningful and actually sounds like something that I'd read in a children's book, like The Night Before Christmas... not because of the content but because of how it was written. Maybe I'm just weird I don't know but that's what it sounded like to me. Very very cute thanks for sharing!

-othersideofthemirror

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