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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
A little scared to trust you For I've been lied to far too much A little scared to love you I've just been hurt a bunch Please don't make me like your others Don't play me for a fool Don't say you love me, and then just leave me And after play it cool. |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
This was a poem i could deff relate to i liked it alot.. I feel the same with trusing people and loving people.. its not so easy for some people b.c of things that may have happend in that persons past.. it was deff a good write and i think you could have deff kept goin on with this write it seems as though you had alot to say about this topic but u stopped . this was a very good write thank you ... hope to see more shea |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Not bad. Not bad..Nice to see new fresh faces.  WELCOME TO PIPTALK I cant wait to see you grow as a poet! *Allison* "Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back." [This message has been edited by devinechild22 (12-14-2002 06:46 PM).] |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
hi there. reading through the posts i'm glad to see you're starting to make yourself at home.  don't forget to reply as well as post. you'll find that you'll get more replies to your work if you read and respond to others' work. good write and thanks for sharing.  /jen/ 'i don't care if it hurts, i want to have control. i want a perfect body, i want a perfect soul.' [radiohead] |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
Another day, another newbie... Wonderful work there, keep it up Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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