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xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York

0 posted 2002-12-14 06:47 PM


--This may not make sence to some people b.c its hard to understand..so take wut u can and tell me wut u think thanks..---


The feel of your hands caressing my body
and the soft wispers of nothingness running slowly threw my ears like music
While your soft eyes look into mine with the gentalness of the sun

Your arms are where my journey begins
traveling where I dont no where I am but Knowing Im glad Im their
Im new to this land but somehow I find security and im safe
I find myself gazing into your eyes which tell their own stories longer than before
and i softly kiss your sweet lips that taste so good
beginning to feel myself fall
but im not scared

I take your hand which seems to hold the world, in my hand which holds my soul
look into your cocoa eyes one last time before the nite is threw
and kiss you goodnite tellin you i will dream of you
I walk away and think to myself
This journey will be long but as long as I find security and gentalness
even If I dont know exactly where Im goin
I know Ill be okay

I lie my head which is filled with thoughs hard to verbalize
close my eyes which tell a million stories
and do what I said I would do
and meet him in my dreams....

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rOxXbabY391
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since 2002-12-14
Posts 71

1 posted 2002-12-14 07:26 PM


heyy this is REALLY good!  maybe a title: Secure.  But I'm so sure because you said he was in your dreams.. lol i dunno but GOOD poem!!
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
2 posted 2002-12-14 08:44 PM


VERY GOOD WRITE
I like it and I wish I could think of a name but all of mine are corny
lol

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

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