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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-12-13 09:09 PM



Sitting here, I breathe
Lost, living, wondering:
You and I, we breathe together,
so why must we breathe apart?

You're pullin' away, quickfast
without words you can slice
slice through me deeper then I seek.
Tell me baby, why must this be so?

Seeking right, seeking wrong,
you can find me lost in gray.
Your depths and multicolored layers
are to me unmatched, unable to be lost.

I'll survive along, yes. Baby,
a medical miracle, no? You see
half a man gone, somehow alive,
breathing half a breath.

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-13 10:11 PM


::cathches breath:: That...is deep!! WOW!!
that ... is.. well... I am speechless!! GREAT JOB!!

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

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