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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128


0 posted 2002-12-09 09:29 PM



Torn and pulled apart
When thinking about you
You've captured my heart
Wish I was able to tell you

So many times i've wanted to
Been close to speaking my feelings
Expressing the love i have for you
It's my heart you've been stealing

Your held close in his arms
Only wanting to be him as I observe
Would shelter you from harm
Provide you with everything you deserve

You've caught my attention
Constant thoughts through my head
The best parts I didn't mention
Speechless no words to be said

For my actions should tell all
Because words are unable to
Without you I can't stand tall
My love for you must be true

No doubts in my mind
Your the one for me
We shall see with time
If we were meant to be


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xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York
1 posted 2002-12-09 10:11 PM


quote--
No doubts in my mind
Your the one for me
We shall see with time
If we were meant to be


This was a great last stanza.  good work =)

shea

Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada
2 posted 2002-12-10 06:32 PM


awesome write you better give it to her!!!!

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2002-12-10 09:41 PM


That was a beautiful poem, I truly enjoyed it! "For my actions should tell all, Because words are unable to." I especially liked thos lines.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

4 posted 2002-12-11 08:15 PM


hey,
i really liked this
it was a very good poem
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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