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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA 
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crowded outside, crowded inside Do you prefer cold water over luke warm Or maybe a little of both won’t harm With or without the calm of their storm Is how one must stand without alarm Awaiting ones security to reap disarm Standing away from the loud Beating heart of the group called crowd The blistered whole of what they surround Buried in what they choose to be allowed Buried in what they choose to be said aloud. The wicked awaits your answer Feeding off what becomes their image enhancer The product becoming a fad case called cancer Leaving you so sick without any answer So lost without any advancer… |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
i liked how u ended each line that sounded kewl wen i was reading it hope to read more from u ___________ %$&CATHY%$& _____________ "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was good, i especially like the last part. keep writin! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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