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Stinky Twinkie
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Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-12-08 01:05 PM


This is sort of a series of limericks strung together to make one poem.  Ummm....I think that's all I have to say about this one.


Rose Doesn't Like Little Kids

There was a girl named Rose
that always picked her nose
she got shot,
but didn't rot.
and from her grave she rose

She regained her senses
washed her clothes in 3 rinses
they needed to dry
so she hung them high
on one Farmer John's fences

She was finally prepared
to find some little kids to scare
she found some,
made them run
and hit them with a wheel chair

She began to get tired
she was no longer inspired
she called it quits
took off her mitts
and jumped into the fire

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dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

1 posted 2002-12-08 03:03 PM


hey,
this was hilarious!!!!
it was great!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Agean
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since 2002-11-29
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2 posted 2002-12-08 03:50 PM


interesting and a great read..
devinechild22
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3 posted 2002-12-08 05:23 PM


Riiiiggghhttt.
       *Allison*

WinterWren
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4 posted 2002-12-08 10:35 PM


Lol. I really don't know what we'd do without you here to lighten the mood at pip. I liked your poem.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
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Dinwiddie
5 posted 2002-12-08 10:58 PM


BAM BAM BAM KAZAM

dinky- hey, your name rhymes with mine, that's cool.

Agean- thanks

WinterWren- I don't know what you'd do either. Probably start a club with a plastic robot that rides a broomstick. Yall would use the robot to laugh at and keep yourselves from going crazy....*continues mumbling about broomsticks and robot and sweat-socks*


I'm gonna shut up now, I'm rambling.

-Stinky Twikie-

Greeneyes617
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6 posted 2002-12-09 02:43 PM


Interesting, different, and somewhat mind boggling..If that be the right word for it. Nice read.
Jenn Cirrincione
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7 posted 2002-12-10 08:33 AM


Heh....
I guess I could call it creative. Maybe.
Not a big fan of the limerick though, sorry.

Jenn

"I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans

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