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ForGetMeNot087 Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 15 |
To You The other week was a horrible one, I felt lost Everyone tried to cheer me up and, told me jokes to make me laugh I told them I?m ok, and that I?ll be fine, and they listened, But deep inside I wasn?t My heart beat so fast at times I think it forget to beat every once in a while And when it did felt a stab of pain in my heart At lunch (Friday) I started to cry, And everyone asked if I was ok.. but I just shook ?em off I could tell they were just saying that to be nice As I left the crowd of people trying to be nice I saw you.. Embarrassed as I was to cry in front of you I couldn?t stop Tears of anger for rolling down my cheeks I pushed Lani away as she asked ?You ok?? but you still followed You asked me what was a matter and for some reason I felt like you really cared I hope you did and still do But for some reason you were the only one who got the message to my head.. Hey I care, what?s a matter? So I told you and you listened. Threw my sadness, and sorrow you never judged You gave me a hug One I will never forget.. And made me feel whole again.. after that And for the rest of the day I didn?t feel sad anymore To you, I owe my thanks To you, I am forever in your debt. Hey i am new what do you think? |
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ForGetMeNot087 Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 15 |
Hey the bottom line was not suposed to be there and i don't know whats up with all the '?' they were soposed to be " ' " (you can tell i am new... |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
welcome to passions. This was good for your first poem. I enjoyed how it was told in a story form . Ill be looking for more of your work.. shea |
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