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moonguardian2004
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0 posted 2002-12-04 09:36 PM



when the sun goes down
and the stars fill the sky
i lay in bed thinking
as questions begin to fly

why do i love him
he is the one that broke my heart
but the really ironic part is
i always seem to forget that part

Why do I have a guy that adores me
Yet I can’t feel the same
Why can’t I adore him as he does me
And finally let my heart win this game

Why does everything have to be so complicated
Why can’t things calm down
My friends are all that keep me going
And who help to relieve this almost permanent frown

Why can’t I erase my feelings
As though they were never there
They leave deep foot prints in my heart
That time can only repair

Why can’t time speed up
And move at the speed of light
Yet why can’t I realize
That time won’t make everything alright

So as I lay here
Contemplating the moon
I wish and hope
that my questions will be answered soon

[This message has been edited by moonguardian2004 (12-06-2002 08:17 PM).]

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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1 posted 2002-12-04 09:42 PM


  Aww.. I know how that feels... I often feel the same way, where everything seems to be going right, but your still not happy... I'm like that alot.  This was a really great poem though, you write very well!

                                                                    Rich

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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2 posted 2002-12-05 02:02 PM


Aww..the questions "why..." and "what if.." if only we knew all the answers to our problems..then where would we be? in a perfect world do you think? That wouldnt be interesting at all i guess but it would be nice every once in a while. I hope things get better for you hun...try and turn your frown upside down

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

Rainbowdust
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3 posted 2002-12-05 10:40 PM


One of my friends once told me that a guy she knew had to write a final English exam on the topic "WHY?" Apparently, he wrote one word, handed it in, and got an A for it.... and that word was, "BECAUSE". I don't know how true the story is, but I guess, try and live with the questions, rather than spend a lifetime persuing answers which will only come of their own accord.... questioning builds character though hehe.. doesn't everything? Great poem! I like your handle too!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

WinterWren
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4 posted 2002-12-06 01:08 PM


Wonderful poem, as usual, coming from you. You expressed those feelings well. I hate it when you just can't like them in the same way! And Im sure they hate it too! Horrible situation! Arrgghh!
Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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