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Teen Poetry #6

Midnight

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

0 posted 2002-11-18 05:52 PM

*Note: this poem is best when read slowly*

Midnight

The sky cried out
with rain of fire,
then shut her eyes
and began to tire.

She laid her head
upon the moon,
and listened to
the raven's tune.

She settled in
and came to sleep,
another night
when none shall weep.

~Alicia

Thanks for reading! This is just a short little something I popped out while watching Saturday morning cartoons, not supposed to be anything spectacular, but I hope you enjoyed the read! All comments welcome.

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2002-11-18 06:23 PM

this is good! you paint a picture in my mind.lol thats always the best for me

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

boy and his spirit
Junior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 41
within my heart

2 posted 2002-11-18 07:17 PM

I think this was a really nice poem. It had a certain something, and it sounds really good. I like it and hope to see more from you!

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

3 posted 2002-11-19 07:06 PM

Thank you! I was hoping to get a nice picture painted here, and I'm glad to hear I did. I appreciate the comments.

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

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