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wvplayernotreally
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yakima wa

0 posted 2002-11-18 01:24 AM


This is about teen abuse...it does happen you might not notice it but it does


He looks at me, his mind is engulfed
It's not him anymore
He draws me in with a tender touch
His smile is the lure

I want to be with him
He says he wants to be with me
Slowly the light from his eyes dim
I know it is not longer him

I know his past all to well
What he did with her, what was said
I want him for myself, to comfort me
But, he slept with that girl in her bed

I can't forget it, i want to
I am wrapped around his finger
What can I do?
I love him, i think

Then he wants more, I say no
I push he pulls, i want to cry out
his eyes are dark, love is gone
What was this pain about

He cast me away, into the depths
I turned his eyes on me
I can't get out, there are not steps
He found her again, i lost him

I sit, silent, crying
My minds a blur, I lost him once more
I fell in love, now i lay, broken
He will no longer knock on my hearts door

They now look at me differently
There eyes stare into my soul
They whisper secretly
and yet i know every word

There backs turn, there eyes follow
Why am I different? I was hurt, used
he took everything i was and ruined it
Plain and simple i was abused

I fell into his hands, soft hands
I would do anything for him, my baby
I used to cheer for him in the stands
he was a star, he made me fall in love

once the homecoming king and queen
now he stands alone, i am nothing anymore
Will they listen if i tell them?
This is one more memory for myself to store

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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1 posted 2002-11-18 02:11 PM


Sweet! this was good and I liked the references to peoples eyes. It gave it an eery feeling.

Keep Writin'

Darkness

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2 posted 2002-11-19 03:42 AM


I really hope this didn't happen to you. The poem was truly well-written, but I sincerely hope this didn't happen to you.

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wvplayernotreally
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3 posted 2002-11-19 07:19 PM


Don't worry it didn't...i am just being creative with crude i see at school

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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