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0 posted 2002-11-02 12:18 PM


"Whaoa"
(02/11/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Bouncing off the walls,
Crying out your name.
While you're standing tall,
I'm going insane.
Call me an obssesionist,
Call me a deluciounist,
But, you're blowing my mind....

Chorus
Whaoa...No, I haven't caught my breath yet,
Still follow you 'round in my head.
Whaoa...You and I live on different sets,
But our roads colide in my bed.
Whaoa Oho...

Verse 2
Speeding in my car,
All so reclessly.
Wonder how you are,
In needa company?
Call me an obssesionist,
Call me a deluciounist,
But, you're blowing my mind....

Chorus
Whaoa...No, I haven't caught my breath yet,
Still follow you 'round in my head.
Whaoa...You and I live on different sets,
But our roads collide in my bed.
Whaoa Oho...

Bridge
A straight jacket couldn't hold me
But I'm still cuddled up inside,
Cause only you can set me free
And lead me into the daylight.
You're the one whose blowing my mind....

Chorus
Whaoa...No, I haven't caught my breath yet,
Still follow you 'round in my head.
Whaoa...You and I live on different sets,
But our roads collide in my bed.
Whaoa Oho...

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 11:09 AM


hah, I love this... sounds a lot like a song that would become popular on the radio.  I also pictured people dancing in one of those 50s clubs.  You know, in black and white...

Great song... really well done.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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