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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-11-02 06:54 PM

Together with "Whaoa" and "Her Everything". this one is one of the songs I'm gonna put on my "Demo Album"...So I need your opinions on it, thanks!
this one is a bit different, so be opne minded

Best Wishes,

Brian.

"All I Really Am Is Me"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
(02/11/02)

Verse 1
Just cause /
I dress different / talk different / confess different / walk different /
Everybody's got an opinion about me/ don't you see?
Just cause /
They dress normal / talk normal / confess normal / walk normal
They feel they the got the power to take me out / I doubt it?

Chorus
Some people call me rebelous,
While others refure to regless,
But all I really am is me.
Then some say I'm scandalicous,
My reply: Go the hell you (two words, which may not be said here. Sorry),
Cause all I really am I me.

Verse 2
Now cause /
I say something / do something / I play something / knew something /
They give me the lowest score in history / bunch a dweeps /
And cause /
They say nothing / do nothing / they play nothing / knew nothing /
They think every single person will like them / it's all the same /

Chorus
Some people call me rebelous,
While others refure to regless,
But all I really am is me.
Then some say I'm scandalicous,
My reply: Go the hell you (two words, which may not be said here. Sorry),
Cause all I really am I me.

Bridge
Billy the kid is back / bang bang / ride up the train on the tracks /
And do his thing / watch out here I come / he he/ the man with the fastes gun/
In the wild west / well / just a wild guess /

Chorus
Some people call me rebelous,
While others refure to regless,
But all I really am is me.
Then some say I'm scandalicous,
My reply: Go the hell you (two words, which may not be siad here. Sorry),
Cause all I really am I me.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2002-11-02 07:34 PM

Hey Man. I dunno how it'll go over in 'the industry', but in all honesty I liked it. The lyrics were very well written. Though I couldn't put music to it in my head (although to be fair, that's not saying much

), someone more talented than myself probably could. All in all, I think it's 'Album Worthy'. Later!

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-11-04 11:15 AM

I like this, I saw it as a fast-paced rock song... hah...

The only thing I don't like is the title. I would seriously reconsider that, make it sound less whiney and more upbeat... like your song seems to be.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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