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Captivating Music
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Captivating Music |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Captivating Music Captive the music swelled as fingers dipped in milk black to white’s full orchestration met me and thee in express symphony grand piano which seized the keys black & white would greet we in this spell, held Captive bass black I wore swerved in music’s own chord sway of hip met greet of eyes’ groan click of heels’ intent, low one’s heart did moan sweet a dream to meet in music dark met day in sun’s light in this spell, held Captive |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and your music captivate me from start till end.....gorgeous penned Karilea ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutey captivating Sunshine. HUGS If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love the serpentine dizzy feel of this, sweet friend, this poem held me captive throughout in this flamenco of fondness, I love it, your words always are captivating, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea.. Wonderful tone to this piece.. And of course I love the presentation. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating on all levels. Simply lovely! I love everything about music, so this was an exceptionally delicious piece for me to savor! ~ May you sail along effortlessly on the symphony of life ~ EA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is an orchestrated symphony to this musician's eyes and soul, my friend! Oh, yes...ENCORE The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Karilea, I love the black and white bars you've snared me in... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
As always, just lovely Karilea. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
wonderful poem, I enjoyed this one. thanks. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Notes of beauty. Mozart would be proud. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Extremely good melody here...as always. ThisDiamond |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hello Karilea Nicely done, such beauty I must say. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sunshine...james |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness!! You have such a way with your words. It seemed that I could hear music. Thanks for sharing. With Love From Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, A wonderful, sexy poem. And besides that, I liked the curves of your poetry as well. Or was it the poet?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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