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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 10-03-2002 07:35 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

my legs are never still
they are breathing
lungfuls of lucid air
illicit some might say
but then they are
not stagnating
like some others in view
cirling around marked circles
over and over again
flipping coins to see
what their day shall bring
heads it will snow
tails it shall rain

either way it shall be
congruently cold

so I walked my walk
while you talked your talk
my rapid eyed movement
your inertia-ringed smoke
what in the big wild world
made us tick
even a small while
for you and me
are like the two
who shall never meet

no wonder the story of us
had a cold ending
like everyone else
had predicted
(heads or tails)

a guess that I didnít make
maybe I was blinded
by the light that was you
or maybe it was because
thatís the way I am Ė dark:
walking my walk and
taking my chances
with the sun

come rain or come snow
come pain, fast or slow
(and then maybe glow)
© Copyright 2002 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-03-2002 09:48 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Yes, and I know with all my heart you can surmount anything with your golden heart and glow with success and perserverance! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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2 posted 10-06-2002 12:51 PM       View Profile for Krishankins   Email Krishankins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krishankins

This one needs a bump! Nice one, Sudhir!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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Deep in the heart


3 posted 10-07-2002 01:49 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

When two sides and the included angle of one are equal to two sides and the included angle of another, they are said to be congruent.

It's the angles you have to watch out for

Well done my friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

the_loner_23
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4 posted 10-07-2002 01:55 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 10-30-2002 08:39 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Many thanks for gracing this write... very congruently...

Regards,
Sudhir
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this is sad sweetheart...hope all is better
Artic Wind
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sad, but i enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
iliana
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8 posted 12-07-2007 02:02 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

"thatís the way I am Ė dark:
walking my walk and
taking my chances
with the sun"

Loved those lines!

 
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